A Dream Come True
When I was just a little girl no higher than your knee,
I dreamt of having a horse like you but it was only in my dreams.
I'd ride and take good care of you no matter what the cost, but
years went by and I grew up and thought my dream was lost. Then
one day my dream returned, I got down on my knees,I asked the Lord
to give me a horse PLEASE. I always knew God answers prayer he has
a millon times but would he grant this special wish I've had for all
my life?
Then one day I met your mom a kind and caring woman,we talked
awhile and then she said I have a horse for sale would you like to see
him? Sure I said as horses are my passion. We walked to you and there
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you stood, Do you have treats for me? Your beautiful face and the kindest
eyes are what drew you to me. He use to barrel race she said and I was
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kinda scared. But then she added he has not done that in years.She wanted
a good home for you thats all that really mattered. Something said this is
an answer to your prayers. I was not sure and so I waited,too late you were
sold. But soon I learned that you were mine as a gift from my daughter. Now
our days are spent enjoying scenes of many places, learning,loving, special
buds forever, making dreams come true and prayer are answered at his leasure.
I am so very glad i went to see your mom that day,if I would not have
then those dreams would melt away....and prayers would have gone unanswered.
Very nice but please go to a poem sharing website, this probably violates codes of conduct for this site, if you had actually asked a question like what we thought it might have been more acceptable.
I do however think it was nice.
that is BEAUTIFUL im crying cause that relates to me soooo much! u just made my day with that poem thank you
beautiful poem!!!
in the second line i dont think you should put dreamt then dream
but other then that it looks good!
hope this helps!
also try and pick how many syllables per line and whether youre doing aba
or abc or abbc pattern
or search poems and help on google
AMAZING!
wow that is soo good!
write more!
I love that you shared this. You have written for many girls who dream of having a horse of their own. And, those of us who have their dream horse(s), know the feeling of this dream coming true, I think you ought to have it published somewhere on the web or in print. Thanks for sharing your private feelings and thoughts. I very much enjoyed your poem.
i liked it a lot
aww how sweet
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